Write you own narrative
Tell your life story
Start anywhere
BUT
Treat yourself with compassion
Was the assignment given
The once upon a time
Part was simple
Flowed easily
“She was born in Corona, California
on Tuesday, March 1st. . . “
The self-compassion piece
Is where she tripped
Stuttered to a stop
Felt lost, unsure
Lost her footing, slid in the gravel
Her self-insights were always on-target
Brilliant at times
She knew herself well
Compassion for herself
Was an emotion she never felt
That she could afford
It somehow
Had always felt important
To punch herself harder
Than the world ever could
That in some twisted way
Living through this self-abuse
Could become it’s own insulation
A form of armor
A test that she was tough enough
Fierce enough to survive
Screaming while standing from the back bed
Of a red 1953 pick-up truck
Driving 90 miles an hour
On a twisty, country road
“I dare you to top that one life!”
A giant game of chicken, dare
Always able to cut herself a little deeper
A little bloodier
Than life could
Self-harm is not always carved on the skin
The DNA of a mentally ill
Drug addicted father
And a distant, withdrawn mother
Who had had to choose between her daughter and her husband
Made up her Genetic inheritance
Made up
Her emotional baggage
She always had this nagging feeling
That her mother regretted her decision
To choose her daughter
Her whole life was spent
Trying not to be the monster
She was worried that
She was destined to become
Could she muster compassion
For the beast within?
The one with three heads
Jagged teeth
Razor sharp scales
Nine inch talons
Breathed fire
And burned villages to the ground. . .?
I love the monster component, great creative poem!
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Thank you. This is one of those poems that smarts– a little too autobiographical. But the monster certainly felt like an apt metaphor
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Brave honest stark
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Yup. Another piece that I almost deleted as soon as I posted it. I like it as a piece of writing, it just doesn’t feel . . . comfortable.
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I personally hate writing prompts. If I ain’t feeling it I ain’t dealing it lol
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Hell, this was just my reaction to having the assignment suggested! It will be interesting to see what happened when I actually start the assignment. I have lived several interesting lifetimes and the observation has been made in the past that I can be a little clinical and detached when talking about my childhood. I think the words “weather forecaster” were used! But I’m sure that you are nothing like that!
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You’d be surprised. I have maybe 20 or so memories of my childhood before 12. I am noticing you and I have similar stuff. If you don’t mind my saying. It’s uncanny
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Believe me– I have noticed the similarities! The universe speaks in strange and mysterious ways. Maybe we are supposed to slay dragons together or start a revolution. Or maybe just help each other stay on the rails. I do feel sometimes like I am telling you the good advice I never to listen to when I give it to myself!
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i love the honesty of your expression. a wonderful piece. i’m giving you a hug
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Thank you– I could use a hug tonight.
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I can so relate to the monster!
And…this is just TOO weird, but I was born on March 1st…and in 1960, it fell on a Tuesday…a leap year! I missed being born on February 29th by an hour and nineteen minutes! LOL!
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Okay, that is a really weird coincidence! I was born in 1966. What is even weirder is that in college I ended up sitting next to another student who was also born on Tuesday, March 1, 1966 in the same town in southern California. Turns out we were born 12 hours apart in two different hospitals but were delivered by the same doctor because her mother’s doctor was out of town that day!
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“Her whole life was spent trying not to be the monster.” Loved that one
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Thanks Sam!
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*Shaking my head* I met another author on FB who is also a March 1st baby! For YEARS I had no friends or family with a birthday near mine. Not even my husband or three children. And now I’ve run into two people with the same birthday. I have no words! LOL!
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You know those creative Pisces types!
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