let our bed be an oasis
a sanctuary of soft pillows
and silk
warm jasmine scented air
in the desert of this modern life
let my skin touching your skin
be a balm for your weary spirit
my body a refuge for you
from all that is cold and alien
and other
let my mouth, my kiss
be an endless supply
of sweet refreshing nectar
when you are parched
from thirst
let us make and remake
home for each other in
this sacred place outside
of time and space
we are our own planet here
somewhere north of venus
west of mars
let this remain a place
where there is only you
and only me
our mingled breath
our heartbeats in rhythm
as we lay together
in a tangle of molten limbs
vulnerable
open
safe
Beautiful!
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Thank you Olde Punk! It is good to remind myself that I am not ALWAYS all Winter’s chill and frozen hearts
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Yes it is. You’re Sunshine!!
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**blush** thank you kind sir
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There is something quite ethereal about this …
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Thank you!
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Sigh….!
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Thank you Vidur– high praise indeed!
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Sighs!…Yours to write, and mine to enjoy 🙂
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I am so glad you enjoyed this! Your poetry often has the same effect on me.
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Simply lovely. This makes me smile. 🙂
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Thank you Phoebe– that makes me very happy!
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I love this. So beautiful.
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Fran! So nice to see you here. So glad you enjoyed it. It was inspired by a conversation I got into another blog about what sex is at its best for us and for me that is a refuge where there is mutual trust and a quieting of my always too-busy brain.
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So good this
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Thank you Rob! Glad that it resonated.
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Wonderful, Christine. I think you’ve found a groove. I really enjoyed… “let us make and remake
home for each other in this sacred place outside of time and space”… SO. EXACTLY. IT!
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Mark– I was wondering what you would think. As you might have imagined, this was at least partially inspired by our discussion with Georgia yesterday. I was trying to capture what physical and emotional intimacy is at its best, at its deepest.
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The imagery and emotion is pleasing and does express a deep contentment that I would crave, and yet is so elusive.
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I think that this is one of those things that we would like to be organic, instinctive, chemistry when it is instead something that is nurtured, created together but there has to be an awareness of it as a goal and it has to be a shared goal. There are people in my life that I have trusted almost instantly and instinctively but this kind of space is still something that takes vulnerability and trust and effort to create. My friend Fran up above is a minister and I feel like she would agree with me that there is something sacred to creating this kind of space, a touch of the divine. Please don’t get me wrong– I am NOT religious but I am spiritual.
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I think my background in the church and subsequent departure has left me well rounded in that I wholeheartedly agree. I cannot agree with everything from the pulpit but the sacredness and peace found in this type of relationship is golden and so much more meaningful. I was fortunate to finally find this aspect of a relationship and actually “get this.” Our relationship was this, but life was not cooperating. My former marriage however was “compatible” but there was no relationship. It’s odd where you can find this, but generally I agree, in a truly loving relationship, your intimacy can and should be nurtured and developed over time and experiences, trust, vulnerability. This too however is elusive.
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… and yes… it thought it fitting with that discussion… a wonderful response. Thank you.
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Wonderful!!! So happy you joined #RomanticTuesday !
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Thank you suggesting it!
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My pleasure!!!
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