I stand before you
More naked
More stripped
Down
Than I have
Ever been
Vulnerable
Unsteady
I have always thought
Falling in love
Would be a gentle
Drop backwards
Gracefully landing
Onto piles of autumn
Leaves
Or deep freshly
Fallen snow
But this falling
Is a mad
Uncontrolled
Cartwheeling
Through space
A free-fall tumble
Where I no longer
Know up from down
I am breathless
Worried about a crash
That might leave
My body and heart
Broken
Bleeding
On sharp rocks or
Hanging from
A tree branch
My heart
Pounds wildly
While you free yourself
From your clothes
There is no armor
Left between us
We are revealed
Trembling
Equal parts desire
And fear
After an eternity
You step in
And hold my face
Tenderly
Reverently
And I am feeling
Emotions I do not
Even have
Language for yet
I realize
That you are the
Eye of my hurricane
The calm
In the center
Of this storm
Capable of holding
Us steady
During this crazy ride
I am reminded
Of everything
That has brought
Us here
And this
Remembering
Is grounding
I am less afraid
With your hands firm
But gentle
On my face
As if captured
In amber
Your extraordinary
Eyes
Hold mine
Your skin
So close but not
Quite touching
And suddenly
All I want to do
Is bridge the distance
Between us
And continue
Falling into you
Crazy falling … yet we always do. For me you’ve captured … how so may feel …
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Thank you Eric. I do think that no matter how old we get, falling in love is wonderfully disconcerting and disorienting
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Sublime, Christine.
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Thank you Vanessa! The bones are from an older piece that I wanted to strip down and let the feeling of falling shine through.
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I’ve fallen in love with it 😊
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Thank you my dear! That makes my day.
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Awwwww
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Stunning and replete with emotion
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Thank you Rob! I was trying to capture that vulnerability
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You did it beautifully
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Thank you dear friend
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Lovely poem my friend
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Thank you OldePunk. IT was all about the vulnerability today.
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Sublime
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This is absolutely beautiful- wow amazing
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Thank you– so glad you enjoyed it.
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you’re welcome
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Christine Ray-Brave and Reckless
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Thomas Merton has a wonderful essay about falling in love. I should see if I can find it on the interwebs and share it.
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This has a bulk of it: https://realtruelove.wordpress.com/2012/08/01/thomas-merton-on-love/
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Will look forward to reading it.
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It has been a long time since I read it, but felt it pretty insightful way back then!
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The religion behind this doesn’t resonate with me like it did back in college, but the wisdom still does.
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