Some days I do not just feel sorrow
Some days I am the sorrow
I am the grey sky
That threatens spitting snow
I am the heaviness in your limbs
Your shuffling gait
Reluctant to get
Where you are expected
Some days
I am the sorrow
The stark, leafless, skeletal
Branches of the trees
Dwelling in the in-between
Of not quite late autumn
Not quite early winter
That borderline of the seasons
When light is dwindling
And the darkness grows
Some days
I am the wistfulness
That longing for your younger self
When time stretched endlessly
Before you
The world full of possibility
And the crisp taste of golden fruit
Some days
I am the very ache in your chest
That you feel
When you despair of ever
Finding your soul mate
Who must be out there wandering
In this same twilight
Desperately longing
To find you
🙂
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Thank you!
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amazing stuff…can’t get enough of this feeling I get from your poetry.
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What a compliment! Thank you so much.
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Keep doing it, please. 🙂
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I LOVE writing. S. Francis of Sailorpoet and I are working on some collaborative pieces and the Weyward Sisters at Sudden Denouement will absolutely be collaborating again. Exciting stuff coming up.
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Can’t wait. I will check it out.
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Wow. This is amazing. And I LOVED your reading. 🙂
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Thanks Phoebe. Its a piece I wrote in the fall that I really love and I thought deserved a dusting off.
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This is great on so many levels! Have you a selection of 3 more poems? It’s time to get your voice out into my community again!
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That is an incredibly generous offer Rob. Written work or recorded work?
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For Poets Speak, we’ve got to get the airways buzzing again
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Just wanted to double check. I actually have a lot up on Soundcloud that is new to you but it has been a couple of weeks since I made any new recordings.
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Just email me 3 titles, I’ll do the rest😉
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Strong, beautiful!
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Thank you Moushmi– It’s one of my favorite pieces
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Such a great piece.
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Thanks Sarah!
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“Some days I am the sorrow” is just so haunting and poignant, and inspires me.
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It is one of those lines that just popped into my head while I was walking to my train one morning. The poem started writing itself in my head. The Names She Called Herself was written the same way.
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I get that… “my god. my love. my poet”… came to me while walking my usual route and reflecting on S.D.
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Walks can be meditative that way!
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I really like your piece. It’s amazing and it inspires me to write some too. Last word, SPLENDID!
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Thank you so much! I am deeply flattered that it inspires you.
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This is really good, this definitely got me my poetry high
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Thank you! That is a flattering thing to say.
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