For my wonderful WordPress friends, especially Max Meunier whom I wrote this poem for a few months ago.
We have only recently met
But there is a sense of inexplicable
Connection
An easiness of souls
Like greeting an old, dear friend
Whom I share a deep
History with
As if we had shared
A babysitter as toddlers
And peanut butter sandwiches and Fritos
In the lunchroom in grammar school
And protected each other
From others’ hurtful words
Fought off each other’s bullies
On the playground
Provided band-aids for
Each other’s first broken hearts
What is it about you
That feels so comfortable
So much like home?
There is a piece of you
That feels like it could be
A piece of me
Kindred spirits, twin souls
I am struck by the fact
That your bright shining soul
Is easy to embrace and love
Unconditionally, even from afar
If I can feel that tenderness
For your heart
For your soul
That feels at times as familiar as my own
My new-old friend
Could I learn to love that piece of me?
Lovely! It’s funny how you can meet someone and instantly get a connection better than a person you’ve known your whole life. Thank God for WordPress…
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This has happened to me more than once on WordPress. My family, friends and co-workers for the most part are completely baffled by my need to write and speak my truth. Its nice to be around folks here who get it.
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I’m not even going to lie… I was pushed in to blogging by my younger brother. I’ve been writing sence I was 12 or 13… Or maybe 11? I don’t know when I was young… Lol…
When I started to write for a audience I never would have thought I had eny talent besides fighting. Then the comments came and I thought some were liers but I haven has 1 bad review yet…. And I want a bad review every now and then. I don’t mind..
I’m not a social person at all and I’m really just started learning how to use a computer. I’m very old fashioned… Lol… About almost everything… WordPress saved my life… I’ll honestly say that.
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I completely get it. I had probably not written poetry in 25 years. 2016 was one of the single hardest years of my life and finding my way back to writing and to this community was all that stood between me and the void some days. I think your writing is astonishingly good– your distinct voice is so clear– but I’ll keep that request for constructive criticism in mind.
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Thank you! But you could have told the truth and said my writing is garbage… Lol!
2016 was deffenately horrible to me To…. But not like 2013…. I went to about 17 or maybe 18 funerals that year. Crazy! Your excellent info and writings are great to though… Ya I have a thing about saying the word poem or poetry… What I write are not poems… There directions! I’m more less trying to tell you something then being a quote unquote poet. I don’t know I’m just weird… Lol…
If I may ask though why 25 years…. I feel like I just can’t stop writing. My mind is like a bad trafic jam on i95 and it’s snowing with black ice on the ground.
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This is going to sound lame, but life just got in the way. High demand job, two kids (now 19 and 15) and pretty significant creative ADHD. I tended in the past only to write when I was depressed. So when I started to write again it was like an explosion of everything I hadn’t dealt with in my life for 25 years including some deep issues of loss. Not 17 funerals in one year kind of loss but I lost my mother and my grandmother within nine months of each other and had a miscarriage in between. I deeply regret that all the notebooks I used to write in during my teens are lost.
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Never ever lame at all! I’m here to listen and never judge….
My deepest deepest deepest condolences to all your loses… 💐💐
You are a warrior mother…
Two almost adult kids and loses…
And you ain’t in a psyic ward…
You didn’t abandon your kids or responsibility and kept it moving! And you still manage to blog and write……..
YOU ARE FREAKING AWESOME!!
And a great mom!
I know it’s hard to heal up but your strong and for that you will see better days.. I know it!
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Somedays all we can do is put one foot in front of the other and breathe!
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Damn right
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🙂
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Beautifully penned…. Seriously amazing
……liked reading it…. Keep smiling… 😃😃
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So glad you enjoyed it! It is very special for me.
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I can see that…… And i really enjoyed it…… Be happy and keep smiling…. And yep keep writing like this…..
Stay blessed….. 😃😃
Sanii… ✌✌
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Love it.
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Thank you Mark– I know that you are one of those people who understands how deep the friendships we form here can be.
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The past few months here in W.P. with you and others has been not only mind blowing, but healing, and I’ve made new special friends with a certain passion and vigor I haven’t found elsewhere. Thanks, Christine.
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Thank you Mark! I appreciate you more than I can say. You are good people.
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This is lovely. Great to hear your voice. I was waiting for the shift and i loved that idea of something you cherish in another may be unloved in the self
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Claired–that “aha” moment was a real epiphany for me! That whole “I love you, you are like me, maybe I can learn to love that part of myself” was surprisingly profound.
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Awww so lovely. That’s a connection that’s worthwhile!
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This piece makes me really happy and always reminds me of the wonderful people I have met in the writing community who don’t think I am weird or strange. Or, if they do, they think I am their kind of weird and strange!
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Yes, exactly! It’s refreshing! 😊
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Agreed! I can breathe here.
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