Tiny fractures fan out
Like a spider web
From the point of impact
Where your thoughtlessly
Dismissive words
Became an ice pick
That pierced
My glass heart
Tiny fractures fan out
Like a spider web
From the point of impact
Where your thoughtlessly
Dismissive words
Became an ice pick
That pierced
My glass heart
Ooh..this did weird things to my insides..nice
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Thank you– some days the hurt is sharp and impactful
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To the point and brief … impact indeed!
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Holy! wow!!! My heart felt this…I have an active imagination and really, I felt this visually my heart. In a good way. Love your visually written poem. 🙂
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That is a tremendous compliment– many thanks.
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Your very very welcome my friend. 🙂
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