Writing Prompt: “The horizon breaks to pieces and the mainline is the twilight”
The submissions for my writing prompt challenge were really innovative and interpreted the prompt in very different and very cool ways. My guest judges and I plan on announcing a winner within the next ten days but in the meantime, please enjoy these interpretations. I have included the links to their blogs below so you can enjoy more of their fabulous writing.
Canon of solitude pulls
Untoward to philander
The destination
And lo, thereby did the sky
Push away and gravitate, separate
Falling up and flying down
The earth did resign, main in line
The fear adjudicates the creation
A presumption
The notion that all motion
Did placate the reasons as
The horizon breaks
And the pieces are shooting stars.
The pure soul of twilight enfolds all
Not unlike the remembrance of
A mother’s womb
Supple in its softness
OldePunk writes at RamJet Poetry
Love it!
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I do love Olde Punk’s poetry.
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I’m very fond of it as well! 😊
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Thank you ladies!
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I am a fangirl, what can I say?
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Olde Punk, love the sounds you use to create your poetry and the richness of imagery. These phrases: canon of solitude, the sky did push away and gravitate, and these final lines I find stunning:
The pure soul of twilight enfolds all
Not unlike the remembrance of
A mother’s womb
Supple in its softness
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Thanks Sailor!
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Brilliant piece of poetry Olde Punk, incredibly powerful!
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Thanks Howl
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Reblogged this on RamJet Poetry and commented:
This was a piece I wrote for Christine’s word prompt challenge
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Reblogged this on Secret First Draft: A Site of the Sudden Denouement Literary Collective and commented:
Olde Punk/RamJet Poetry
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