Writing Prompt Challenge Submission: Breaking/OldePunk

Writing Prompt: “The horizon breaks to pieces and the mainline is the twilight”

The submissions for my writing prompt challenge were really innovative and interpreted the prompt in very different and very cool ways.  My guest judges and I plan on announcing a winner within the next ten days but in the meantime, please enjoy these interpretations.  I have included the links to their blogs below so you can enjoy more of their fabulous writing.


Canon of solitude pulls

Untoward to philander

The destination

And lo, thereby did the sky

Push away and gravitate, separate

Falling up and flying down

The earth did resign, main in line

The fear adjudicates the creation

A presumption

The notion that all motion

Did placate the reasons as

The horizon breaks

And the pieces are shooting stars.

The pure soul of twilight enfolds all

Not unlike the remembrance of

A mother’s womb

Supple in its softness


OldePunk writes at RamJet Poetry

18 thoughts on “Writing Prompt Challenge Submission: Breaking/OldePunk

  1. Olde Punk, love the sounds you use to create your poetry and the richness of imagery. These phrases: canon of solitude, the sky did push away and gravitate, and these final lines I find stunning:

    The pure soul of twilight enfolds all
    Not unlike the remembrance of
    A mother’s womb
    Supple in its softness

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