I look to the stars
In this onyx night
Trace constellations
with tentative fingertip
My heart aching to find
the shape of you
in raised dots
that read like braille
to my soul
© 2017 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
I look to the stars
In this onyx night
Trace constellations
with tentative fingertip
My heart aching to find
the shape of you
in raised dots
that read like braille
to my soul
© 2017 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
I love the picture you included with your poem!
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Thank you!
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Love this! I love the stars, the night sky is magical
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So glad!
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Adore “feedinghangrymonsters” Been there, done that
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Beautiful ❤️
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Thank you– really missing a dear friend right now
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“braille to my soul” I really liked that comparison. sorry I don’t know what’s the technical name for it. It is inspiring.
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Thank you! I am all about the feels myself.
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You are welcome! I have been recently trying to touch in with the emotional side of myself to fuel my writings. It’s been wonderful.
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It always feels very liberating to me
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This is so beautiful.
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Thank you Sarah!
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I loved that tracing with fingertips. so much we can remember like that without a photograph even.
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Indeed
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How brilliant is this? This idea of the stars being like braille. It just seemed so natural that when I read it my mind says, “Of course…they are absolutely like that.” So well done, Christine.
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Thank you Eric. It actually didn’t cross my mind until last night but it was an “aha” moment for me too
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I’ve been longing to look at the night sky especially as beautiful as this.
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Glad to know that this was evocative for you
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Thanks for posting this 😇
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you are very welcome!
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Beautiful kind of longing pain.
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Thanks Emily– that is certainly what I was feeling when I wrote it
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It’s lovely
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Thank you so much
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“that read like braille to my soul” – Beautiful.
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Thank you!
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Haunting
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Written about someone I was missing very deeply.
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Flattered for the reblog
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Love it.
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Thank you so much!
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Reblogged this on Max Meunier and commented:
beautiful sentiments from my dear friend Christine Ray of Brave & Reckless
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