The strings of my heart
are like the strings of a guitar
thin, seemingly fragile
but steel, with tensile strength
They dig into tender tissue
create calluses
sometimes draw blood
when strummed too much
At times the music they produce
is too flat
when these strings sag with weariness
is too sharp
when they are wound too tight
When pulled to the breaking point
they can snap
broken strands
curling into themselves protectively
damage seemingly irreparable
Each string of my heart
can ring individually with acoustic clarity
notes floating gently in the air
can tickle your inner ear
Together
these heartstrings
can create complex chords
Sing my truth
play a haunting song
that draws you closer
invites you in
swirls in your head
calls to your heart
until your heartstrings start
to vibrate in tune with mine
Perhaps we will play a duet
create a joyful noise
© 2017 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
This is beautiful, I really enjoyed it!
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I’m so glad!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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Love it
Thanks for sharing!
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Thank you!
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Very nice. I like how the narrator makes herself vulnerable.
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Thank you
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I could hear all of those tones
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All the times I have badly tuned my guitar. . . .
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Haven’t we all?
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Where you cringing at the sound? My kids briefly took violin lesson– we considered paying them NOT to practice!
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My kids all played strings of some sort. I can still hear those shrieking
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My daughter has a full drum kit.
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Thank god for drum pads!
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Oh my!! I can imagine
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Love your short, beautiful lines, their precision, the intimacy of this verse … as a musician, it really speaks to me
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That is a lovely compliment– thank you.
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It just touched my heart!
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I’m so glad!
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Do check my poetry’s ma’am when you get time on squiggledfeelings.wordpress.com
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I’ll check this thank u
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I love this idea that our hearts can be tuned, and be out of tune. But that they are always capable of love. Just lovely.
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