A jealous rain
fell from the envious sky
soaked your clothes
translucent
caressed your hair
like a lover
left lingering droplets on your eyelashes
that sparkled in the low light
traced your cheek bones
like a sculptor
bathed your skin
warm
but could not penetrate the surface
and reach your heart
where I live
© 2017 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
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Thank you so much!
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This is just so sweet. .. I love it… reminds me of the song jealous by labrinth.
I love this.
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Which is what I was listening to when I wrote. Any resemblance is probably inevitable
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Reblogged this on MOVIEFRIQ and commented:
I’m loving this. Love Thursday
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It’s raining here today — terrific, lyrical piece!
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Thank you!
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Oh this is gorgeous, Christine! Love it! 🙂
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Thank you kind sir!
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Loved it!
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Thanks Vidur!
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wow ………… good one. Also you don’t have an email subscription to your blog.
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Thank you! I should have an email subscription button on the bottom of the screen under the Search box
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I can’t seem to find it 😦
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So sorry! I can see on my PC screen
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Ok let me recheck.
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