“Mum Moon ate the dark chocolate!” yelled Ash. Mum panicking, yelled back asking him did Moon actually eat it all. Ash getting more panicked told her that he did and that he’s lying on the floor moaning and that his tummy looks funny. Mum frantically getting out of the bath drips large drops all over the floor making it slippy. “Ash you’ve got to get him outside quickly”. Finding clothes she tries to get them up her tacky legs and thinks ‘yet another terrible start to the day’. “Mum he’s going to be sick” a plaintive Ash calls up to her. On reaching him she grabbed Moon and dragged him outside. He did indeed start throwing up; black vomit. She was glad that she knew he’d eaten the chocolate because it looked like blood. Stupid dog.
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Completely creative take on the prompt!
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Yes, fantastic angle!!
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Wow…it was genuinely impressive writing….great work.
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Stupid dog, clever piece!
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Wow, A fun and interesting take!
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Reblogged this on Bone&Silver and commented:
So I entered a short piece into this Writing Challenge; like so many other submissions, mine veered toward the darker side of life: https://braveandrecklessblog.com/2017/05/23/moon-ate-the-dark-challenge-findinggabrielle-griffin/
Then today, I saw this entry, so had to re-blog. I love it! Thank you to Christine at her Blog Brave and Reckless for all this creativity and activity
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Yes, this is awesome, totally. Every once in a while we gotta take a break and just fucking laugh, right?
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The submissions for the Moon Ate the Dark were extraordinarily diverse.
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As I work my way backwards, I agree… maybe I will take the prompt late at some point… alas… kids need waking.
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It is a cool prompt. . .
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It is, indeed it isz
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