I read all three. I see you find strength in words and music and that’s amazing Christine. When darkness descends on me, I look further inside myself, I need silence, then my inner voice speaks. Different and odd ways we all have to deal with our demons and ghosts eh? I have never read haiku written like this and I loved your presentation.
I get that totally! I am verbose or ramble and I want to say less to convey much, however my challenge is also vocabulary and so I try to read to increase that. And with less words thought becomes concise too. This was stripped bare but had good bones!
I read all three. I see you find strength in words and music and that’s amazing Christine. When darkness descends on me, I look further inside myself, I need silence, then my inner voice speaks. Different and odd ways we all have to deal with our demons and ghosts eh? I have never read haiku written like this and I loved your presentation.
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It was an assignment for a creative writing class. I was pleases with the results
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it was a good challenge to show that the haiku can be so powerful with so few words, I like that sort of power!!
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Me too. I have a history of using too many words and have been learning that stripping things down often increases the punch
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I get that totally! I am verbose or ramble and I want to say less to convey much, however my challenge is also vocabulary and so I try to read to increase that. And with less words thought becomes concise too. This was stripped bare but had good bones!
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Thank you
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