You are swift moving water
traveling through dense forest
I am the moon
cool and remote
my silver light
glittering upon your surface
where I see myself reflected
I am almost beautiful
As you flow over rocks and logs
rush over cliffs
become a waterfall
you sing me a song
of longing
desire
until recklessly into your depths
I plunge
© 2017 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
Truly mesmerizing
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Thanks Shelling!
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Love it
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Thank you
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It is a brave thing to take the plunge.
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Indeed
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Wow! Beautiful!
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Thank you. I was inspired by a writing prompt on The Ink Owl “Into the deep I plunge”
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That’s a nice prompt. Yours fit perfectly!
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🙂
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amazing
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thank you
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i already submitted some articles but i dont know how to get more view can u tell me please
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I don’t actually see any content on your blog– just placeholders. I would work on getting some content up and recommend following some of this advice: https://braveandrecklessblog.com/2017/03/06/brave-and-recklessadvice-for-new-wordpress-bloggers/
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Lovely and your words have a beautiful flow in this piece.
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Thank you– I thought a lot about the movement of water while I was writing
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Amazing
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Thank you so much!
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