the loss of you
punctured the night sky
like tiny pinpricks on a black canvas
covering the moon from view
allowing only the smallest rays
of cool silver light
to feather touch
my pale lips
my empty hands
© 2018 Christine Elizabeth Ray – All rights Reserved
A pinprick that goes deep.
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Indeed
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Reblogged this on cabbagesandkings524 and commented:
Christine Ray – a loss – just a pinprick?
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Reblogged this on The Militant Negro™.
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Lovely. I especially like the first two lines.
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Thank you Ali
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Beautiful!
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Thank you so much Eric– very much triggered by your comment. Suddenly this image was crystal clear in my mind. Thank you as always for the creative inspiration
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An honor for me,Lady!
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❤
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This is just Wow! I have never thought that loss could be enclosed in such a simple and yet so powerful an image.
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Thank you so much Iulia. It literally came to me in a flash
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Beautiful! ❤
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Thank you
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Simply beautiful. What more can I say?
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Thank you so much!
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You welcome!
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