My dear friend and frequent collaborator Stephen Fuller wrote a response poem to Morning Tanka 3. I have paired them here below.
Morning Tanka 3
Dancing in the dark
With the demons in my head
I lead, they follow
Our steps familiar, practiced
Shall we waltz, foxtrot , tango?
I should have refused
Told them my dance card was full
But they know me well
I always slip willingly
Into their poison embrace
The Demon Whispered Back
Where have you been?
I waited in the usual spot
Knew it would just take time
I am patient for my dancer
She dances like no other.
Tried to refuse me again?
I would laugh, but we know
My laughter only rides our rhythm
While you try to slip
Poison in my sweet tea,
Again.
Brilliant!
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Steve is gifted at picking up threads and weaving something beautiful
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❤❤❤
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Stephen plays the dancing demon quite well.
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He does indeed!
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This is fabulous!
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Thanks you! Steve is pretty fabulous.
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It is always fun to find those threads and dive into a character… thank you for writing the original post and sharing it! The Demon…
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